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How to Write Fanfiction
How to write fanfiction. By Eddie Striker
Hello, there everyone. I'm here to tell you how to write fanfiction correctly, as most authors seem to require a tutorial. I ask you to realize that I have NOT been keeping up with the current Naruto chapters, nor do I have ANY inclination to. I'm really not a "SasuNaru" fan, but I used them because this pairing is where I often see these mistakes.
The sentances that will be repeated are:
Naruto looked over at Sasuke, sitting at the desk in front of him. He thought about the kiss they shared just a few moments earlier. Naruto's blue eyes clouded over with lust...dattebayo.
Using random Japanese words in the middle of a sentance. I tend to use honourifics such as "-kun", "-chan", etc... sometimes, but I avoid doing the following:
Naruto looked over at Sasuke, sitting at the desk in front of him. He thought about the seppun they shared just a few moments earlier. Naruto's aoi me clouded over with inyoku...dattebayo.
Now, while the first sentance
five hour energyi suppose
last week was only an aftershock
of the earthquake you were before.
this place used to vibrate
with metal strings and melodic,
testimonies to life,
emitting coffee-scented moods
and the burn of it too.
i had memorized the
sounds of silence,
i couldn't help but relish it.
no longer had i known
the sounds of folk
and scent of mocha-
you became nothing more
than an echo of the laughter
i so desperately needed to hear again.
then the echoes got louder,
bouncing ferociously off the walls
to be made manifest
i walked into your room
expecting exactly what i found-
an unmade bed,
and an empty beer
(the one that you insisted you needed
just days ago).
i pressed my nose
into the pillow
for incense and cologne and starbucks
to penetrate my mind
and thinking fervently
i already know
what a clean sheet smells like."
how strong an aftershock can be,
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